

Death...I look to my future and wonder what's left, As I see it now, there's nothing but death. Consumed by pain and surprise, I'm left with nothing but tears in my eyes. So many things still not complete, But all I have left is to lay here and sleep.Death...


Battle Zone...Am I a coward because of my fear?Battle Zone...
I don't know, but I can't dry my tears. Like a child in the dark... Fear fills my heart. I step away into the unknown, Upon a deadly battle zone.
I'm scared...


Discarded HappinessI remember how it felt when you gripped my hand, Your skin being pierced by an unfamiliar man. As it goes through you squeeze as hard as you can. Open your eyes; it's over, now you can stand.Discarded Happiness
It's moments like this...
These moments I'll miss, Almost as much as your soft and delicate kiss. Oh, how I just wish You hadn't dismissed A love so pure... It could have been bliss.


Deminished DesireQuite often I've said what I feel through my poetry, Many people are touched, even without knowing me.Deminished Desire
For those who follow you know of my loss. I never realized how much pain my jealousy could cause. Now like a blinded dove I'm lost. I'm capable of flight, but at what cost. As far as I'm concerned I'm encircled by walls...
Sadly it seems that I'm permanently damaged, But other senses are strong and somehow I manage.
Many times I question why continue. Is it my pride that drives me? Or do I see something in you.
No it has to be you, your presence kee
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share your kindness, not your hate.
love the art, before yourse
What you know you can't explain, but you feel it. You've felt it your entire deviant life, that there's something wrong with the story. You don't know what it is, but it's there, like a splinter in your mind, driving you mad.
You take the blue pill, the story ends. Your browser closes and you believe whatever you want to believe. You take the red pill, you stay in wonderland. And, I show you how deep the rabbit hole goes.
I offer only the truth, nothing more.
Take: The Red Pill
Take: The Blue Pill
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The Angry Deviant
Random Deviant
*Garnet*
You have done exceptionally well at conveying emotions in a great deal of your pieces. I pointed that out on a few in recent remarks. Your shading it amazing. I can't go on enough about how realistic you can get some of your pieces looking. On top of all of that your eye for color is almost unparalleled. You seem to have mastered the art of eye candy...lol. When I look at your pictures the colors alone tend to make my eyes dance around the page searching out various highlights and details. Those are the things that you should maintain as you continue on.
Places you need to work on are your anatomy, style, and confidence.
While most of your pieces are bright vibrant and lively, there are many flaws in the anatomy of the charaters you are drawing. I have to say that recently you have gotten better, but that doesn't mean that you couldn't concentrate on that a little more.
Also I would say you need to work on your style... now let me say before I go on that I have no problem with your style, and I personally love it, but... You limit yourself to one particular style too often. That will limit the opportunities that you may have later on. I think that you should work on becoming more versital and display some of the other things that you are capible of. Case and point... where are the men at? I haven't seen one man posted on this site or in your collection at home. That will hinder you if you aren't careful.
The last thing isn't anything about your art at all really. It is more about you personally. You need to have more confidence. Looking at every single one of your pieces you have something negative to say about them in your Artist's Comment section. There is no need for that. I understand that we can be our own worst critics at times, but I believe that there needs to be a line drawn. You are putting out great work. Be proud of it, and accept the critisism as something to make your good work great, and your great work phenomenal in the future.
Well, that's my two cents. Hope it helps. You are a great artist that is only getting better. Good luck.
™contenu™
yea thats a loves deviant in a non gay way i just needed to spell that out.
Curiosity killed the cat,
despite all the black she was wearing.
~*gothkitty*~
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